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I'm sorry, haven't done this in YEARS

And do these thing in small actions at a time. You should have started with you leaving the house, waking up, walking into town or something because you did not allow me to introduce the professor, what the lab looks like or anything. You just dove in and grabbed a pokemon.

Until it satisfies your character's needs. You didn't introduce ANYTHING at all about your trainer. You didn't share any thoughts on anything, so you need to add emotions, thoughts, and such. And you should try to develope your family. You dont have a set length that it has to meet, but you just need to use content. Take example from other people.

How long should it be?

OK

Hello. I would like to tell you that your RP is short. You only typed about 2 sentances, and that is not enough. A good one to look at for reference is GamernamerJJ. You need to develop your character, share your thoughts, and make your post at least a paragraph. There are some exceptions like when your are battling, but until then please edit your post, thanks.