Conversation Between Blair_Willow and GreenMan
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Hey Blair I saw that you got on and missed ya, how is this crazy thing called life treating you?
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Must reallly be in the mood to write poetry it would seem i have produced one more
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Hmmm. Really thoughtful. I never thought of someone giving advice like that.
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I got a new peom up enjoy, love to hear your feed back as ussual
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Yeah it certainly is, still haven't fullying forgiven myself for what I did, in a great sense I'm at the point that second to last paragraph says
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Fortunally I've been forgiven and I'm already starting to repair the damage I caused
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Made a stupid mistake, ended up hurting one of my friends that I didnt' want to hurt
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But what did you do that's so bad?
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Interesting that it came out the way, it wasn't the way i thought i wrote it I wrote it as Can i forgive myself for what I have done?
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Because the whole time, you're wondering "What could have been so bad to be unable to forgive yourself?"
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Why do you discribe it as that?
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I like. =] It's deep and mysterious.
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Got anouther Poem put up, would like to hear what you think about it and why.
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Glad you liked it, I was unsure of how it turned out
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Aww. =] I really like it. =]
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Ok I tried my hand at a more freestyle poem hope to hear what you think of it
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I wouldn't discribe my mind as poetic there are a few things that fall way before that
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Because all it takes to write good freestyle poetry is a poetic mind. =]
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Well, I'd imagine you'd probably be good at it. (:
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Ah ok so you can really relate to it well, both Silent friend and You and me are actually based on the relationship that i have with two diffrrent people.
Might have to try my hand at freestyling then just to see if I like it or can do to much with it
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I've been on both sides of it.
Well, freestyle isn't as hard as rhyming.
Like...
You just post sentences pretty much.
Like you're writing a paragraph, but type it in poetry form.
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No I haven't tried my hand at freestyle I start with a single
Line and build up from there, not really sure how I would do freestyle though I would like to learn abou it and see what I can come up with. When you said you could relate to the poem You and Me which side of it are you on?
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You and Me I really liked. I'm in that situation a lot with my friends, so I can relate.
Silent Friend is really nice too. =]
Have you ever considered using poetry that doesn't follow a Rhyme Scheme, though?
That's the only type of poetry I do. Freestyle, that is.
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I uploaded two more Poems that I did, would like to hear your feedback on both of them
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Yeah when it comes to poems them being a bit charged is good, I mean I can remember how I was feeling at the point I wrote it, that I find crazy
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They're full of personal emotions.
I think that's a great thing with poetry.
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Why do you lke them?
I'm a bit courious to what makes the appealing to you?
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Well, like I said, they're really goo d(:
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Thanks I do appreciate it, like i said before all three came from a time I was trying to figure out my emotoins
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Your poems are really good (:
Rapids in the Heart was my favorite (:
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I know that you asked me to inform you when I finally got my peoms up, they are under my artwork thread hope you enjoy them