1000 Mile Love Story
1000 Mile Love Story -Verse 1- You're 1000 miles away, and baby I just pray, that hopefully I'll be with you one day. Oooooooh. -Verse 2- I must think of anything to do, just so I can be with you. Cause your 1000 miles away, and there's a million things to say. Oooooooh. -Chorus- You're 1000 miles away, and there's a million things to say, cause we're writing this love song baby, you take my breath away. -Verse 3- You know I feel this way, and there's so much for me to say, you make me happy when things are greyyyyy. Ooooooooh. -Chorus- You're 1000 miles away, and there's a million things to say, cause we're writing this love song baby, you take my breath away. x2 Oooooooooh. |
Awesome dude who you wrighting it for?? (BROSHISH)
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Well done, Very well done!
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I like it, a bit short, really. I think an instrumental would be cool. I know you worked hard on this, but I have just one change.
You're 1000 miles away, and there's a million things to say That is me, because something you learn from pop culture is that people like association. Like in the song 1,2,3,4. Sometimes they use the word for and not four, because it is clever. Using a pattern of words appeals is what I am saying. |
I'm gonna incorporate TeamPlasma's idea, but he gets the credit for that part.
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I'll also agree and say it's really short... And typically the basic format would be verse 1, verse 2, chorus, verse 1 (and if you want to make it really long, chorus, verse 2). But yeah, you'd typically have about 5-6 lines of lyrics per verse/chorus in a mostly standard format... |
Thank you all for the support. I will change the one part to they're are a million things to say.
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You should make a YouTube video of you singing the song. Broshish
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It's not going on Youtube, broshish.
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Are you a singer?
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Used to be, ever since my voice dropped. Nay nay.
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Lol, that's when I started.
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