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Old August 6, 2011, 08:56:47 PM
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Default Critique This! Full Swing vs. Philanthropy

So far the foreword for Philanthropy and the full prologue plus one scene from Full Swing is posted. Let me know in this thread what you people think of each so far, the ideas behind each, etc. and which one you like better.
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Old August 7, 2011, 11:31:11 PM
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I like the opening bit in "Philanthropy." It seems to be foreshadowing Nathan's role of helping out others with the greatness he attains in adulthood. Lookin' good so far, Lite!

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