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TheRagingTyranitar · #1 May 25, 2010, 07:31:04 AM

I made some sidebars for my LeafGreen playthrough.Here they are-

Route 3 Pokémon list

Misty's Starmie

Sprout Tower Pokémon list

Brock's Team(this one is not good)

I need criticisms

Ningamer · #2 May 25, 2010, 10:15:53 AM

Make the text on the Route 3 Pokemon list white.
Misty's Starmie is good - Make one for Staryu when she has it out, then when she switches change it. Same for all other gym leaders.
Methinks you got some facts wrong on the Sprout Tower one. It also looks squashed up.
Scrap the Brock one and replace it with one like Misty's.

Also, I don't think this should be in /b/uizel. Maybe Art/Music/Fan-Fic/Media board instead?

OMGITSJAD · #3 May 25, 2010, 10:41:18 AM

Those look really nice!
Only thing I say is don't have black text on the brown background so it's not hard to see.
*moves thread*

TheRagingTyranitar · #4 May 31, 2010, 03:07:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ningamer

Make the text on the Route 3 Pokemon list white.
Misty's Starmie is good - Make one for Staryu when she has it out, then when she switches change it. Same for all other gym leaders.
Methinks you got some facts wrong on the Sprout Tower one. It also looks squashed up.
Scrap the Brock one and replace it with one like Misty's.

Also, I don't think this should be in /b/uizel. Maybe Art/Music/Fan-Fic/Media board instead?

1. I tried changing it to complete white but it doesn't look good.Maybe I will change it to yellow-ish shade.
2. The sidebar for Misty's Staryu will be on the left side of the video.This one will be on the right.
3.Actually,I had a small space(115 Width) for the sidebar.So adding that much information in it is almost impossible.
4.That one is actually one of my old sidebars.So it is not as good as the new ones.

Aries · #5 June 1, 2010, 03:06:55 PM

The one for Brock looks like something from Bulbapedia. XD

TheRagingTyranitar · #6 June 1, 2010, 03:52:02 PM

Because I copied from there

Yoshizard · #7 June 1, 2010, 08:22:48 PM

The Misty one is the superior Gym Leader design. Also, how are you going to use a Sprout Tower sidebar for a LeafGreen LP?

TheRagingTyranitar · #8 June 2, 2010, 04:16:28 AM

I will use them when I do HGSS

Ningamer · #9 June 2, 2010, 04:21:42 AM

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Originally Posted by TheRagingTyranitar

2. The sidebar for Misty's Staryu will be on the left side of the video.This one will be on the right.

I was thinking that you could have some information on Misty at the right of the screen, just showing her team, levels and prizes, and the bar on the left shows details on the current Pokemon that she has out. It should change when she switches her Pokemon out. That was you can keep the same layout for all gym leaders (Not all leaders have two Pokemon, you know).

TheRagingTyranitar · #10 June 2, 2010, 04:32:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ningamer

I was thinking that you could have some information on Misty at the right of the screen, just showing her team, levels and prizes, and the bar on the left shows details on the current Pokemon that she has out. It should change when she switches her Pokemon out. That was you can keep the same layout for all gym leaders (Not all leaders have two Pokemon, you know).

That's good idea.Also,I keep changing the layout of the Gym Leaders like showing the details of Pokémon which is out only on the left side.Thanks,anyways.