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TRAINER
This is nice, I see flaws. B ADVICE: So what I see for improvement is SCRATCH! you said you couldn't find anywhere. Well, I think you could have taken the nubs of the legs and made the body a sphere. You could have scratched in a placement for the right wing. The right wing is actually behind it. unless it has 2 tails then that is fine. And one more thing is never mirror things, or use 2 of the same leg, tail, arm, etc.. NEW ASSIGNMENT I want to see a... fish. And make it a (lack of a better word) nice. Like dont make it carnivorous like a shark or |
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This is serious improvement. This is pretty good, but as you may have seen it is a bit strange, being a shark with butterfly-ish wings. B+ ADVICE 4 U: Okay, today it was pretty good. What could be improved is the part selection. When you used the shark, it seemed a bit harsh with the other parts of its body. The colors were okay. But if you looked at the top fin, it has really lighter colors than the outline. That was something that popped out at me. Also the scratching was good. ASSIGNMENT Now make a Hippocampi. (google it)
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PHANTOMxTRAINER
This is pretty unproportional... Little horse, HUGE body. C ADVICE: It seems we have taken a step back, yes? Like I said; It is out of proportion. Most of it is okay. What could be better is the body mostly. What this is about is using parts to make a new one. For you it seems like it is get a few pokemon and swap parts. If you look at the example one on the front page, the only pokemon you could probably deprive from it is Lapras and (maybe) Kecleon. So what I would have done is take is Rapidash/Zebstrika and Gtrados/Milotic and fused. Taken away the flames/mane. Scratched on a regualy head. put a fin on it, and blam. NEXT ASSIGNMENT, WHICH YOU WILL DO BETTER ON OR ELSE. Make a Snail* *I would us magcargo's shell and scratch it so it would look like it isnt broken and scorched. (not that you have to) Last edited by teamplasma; April 29, 2012 at 11:51:12 AM. |
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GHOST TRAINER
WOW! So much improvement! A! ADVICE: So this was pretty good, like you said. A LOT of scratching. There could have been more highlights on the shell. You did VERY well on the body and I would like to see more like this! NEXT ASSIGNMENT Make me a... Bomb-like pokemon. One this one I dont want the body to be the bomb |
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xTrainer
So, you almost broke my rule... A- Advice: So I see you went with the head and thats a little risky. But like you said you are scratching a lot lately, now you have about the opposite problem as before. You cant find places for pokemon. So lets work on that while till getting a good balance or scratch. Try this. Make a warrior. It doesn't have to be an actual person, but maybe a creature/warrior. I will show you something similar my friend did. |
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DEWOTT
So you want to be a That's awesome. I know you already know about them and have okay skills on scratching. BUT we still are going to go easy at first to evaluate the variables. I would like you to do the following, please: Magikarp + Feebas (Swap parts and recolor) Corsola + Dunsparce (Dun is the base) |
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So it seems that a lot of people have found this with experience. That means that my methods will change a bit. Well I am glad you came. First I want to see you recolor this : Pikachu colored as Zubat. Tentacool with Cobalion. If you think you need a guide I will give you one. |
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It's fine!
We all have lives to attend to. The first two are average. B. There weren't many issues. The last one was pretty okay. You mirrored some stuff and there maybe some recoloring issues. But I am on my phone so that is unsure. But it also gets a B. Next one I am going to make harder. So I am just giving you one. Sometimes in being a fusist you have to do 3 or more together. Try this: Granbull, Munchlax, and any Pokemon! |
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That maybe true, but you also have some other factors that you need to consider while doing it. The main one for me is creativity. I think adding Gran-s jaw to Munch would be cool! I was hoping that you would just o a part swap/ add. Shake things up a bit and balance it all. The next issue is the ears. The ears are VERY bright on its skin, that meant you should make the ears the color of the body and the tips something darker from another pokemon. Because as we know, when you fuse more then one you can recolor using any of the already chosen Pokemon. Nevertheless you get a B.
Can you take what I taught you and do something for me? Use scratching! It is something I don't think I have seen you do. It is only hard if you make it hard. It is where you make or change something on the sprite by hand. It help you a lot when you get good at it. It could be from the shading to the pattern on the skin, to the shape of the ear! So your assignment is simple. Take what I told you, Take the new info, make ANY new sprite! Hey Shiny! Nice to see you! You did well on this,and it seems that you know some! So I am going to leave you with what you got with a little advice. Your Tentacool reco was good, I examined it and there were 0 FLAWS!!! That is great especially for someone in recolors! So you get a HUGE A+! Now for the other one. I was examining it and it was good for a while gut when I was testing the outlines, they were off. You had some of the same outlines for regular Pika on the new Pika and that is a no no. But it is a small flaw and I hope you pay more attention! You get a B. :] Now can you please do this: Horsea ---> Colored as ---> Pansear Blissey ---> Colored as ---> Politoed Mankey ---> Colored as ---> Pelipper Do you know how this works? Or shall I explain? This is different from a regular reco. |
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this one is really nice. You didn't really do anything wrong. I may have done something differently but you still did it right and really did good. A! this one isnt bad. I would just like to remind you to recolour EVERYTHING. B. I feel like you Know what you are doing. So I am going to kick it up a little. I don't think we talk about this, but in Recolouring there are going to be some Pokemon that will be impossible to Recolouring with just one Pokemon so u have to do it with two or more. So it is a little harder but not really. Hariyama recoloured with colors from Excadril and Beartic. |
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DEWWY This is good. Now you did good on most but you wont get better if I dont show you were you went wrong. So I understand it is fusions, but the twig was not recolored like it should be. It didn't have to be the colors of charmander, because when it is a 'free sprite' (so to speak) it can be what ever and you could have been more creative. The wings are a good start for scratch. The shading was a little weird. And the outlines were a little too dark at the bottom. But all in all it was a pretty nice start. B Okay so lets do this a little more directly. Fuse Meowth and Hippopotas with some scratch. If it is too weird of a combo you can ask me for a new one. |
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So do this when you feel like it: Spoink colored as a pig. (Any kind of pink, brown, etc) |
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This is fine. Nothing really bad. There are a few things I am iffy on. B.
Lets do a little refresher or all we learned. Archen Colored as Axew Cresselia colored with the colors of Piplup and Corphish Awesome. I like the spots. A You seem to be getting good. Do you feel like it is easy? Beartic colored as the Chicago Bears. Ursaring colored as the Chicago Cubs. |
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I don't know if this is bad, or if it's worse, but I have to say, this is the worst thing I've ever seen that came as a result of my handiwork. I should just quit now, I'm obviously a failure. The only thing I could do at this point would be to fix your grammar, but that's rude. I couldn't include the darkest shade of gray for Swalot because...I dunno, I'm just dumb, I guess. I messed up on the eyes, so I played with those, too. And sorry is the pic's kind of small, I'm no good with image websites or resizing. |
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Anyways, you actually didn't do THAT bad, there are a few things that could be fixed. BECAUSE THIS IS A LEARNING EXPERIENCE, AND YOU NEVER HAVE DONE THIS BEFORE!!! So I don't wanna here this stuff from you. Thanks . So I would first of all give it a C. But now Here is what you could have done better... You don't have to try to include all of the colors of Swallot, just to the point where the whole sprite doesn't have any of the original colors (not including black or white). So if there is a shade or two that wasn't needed, fine. The eyes should have stayed white, because like I said in the paragraph above... So yes, they were bad, but this is okay, you are in school. There was a few issues in the coloring on the grey-ish part. Where there were supposed to be littler colors and you put darker ones. But that can be fixed easy. Now this might make yo a little mad. But please redo this and we will see how you do. |
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Not bad at all. Yo did pretty good for the most part! A! (That is for both). There will almost always be something that I would have done different. But that doesn't matter really because you did mostly all that you were able to do right.
So do you think you know what you are doing now? Do you want to take the test? |
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So his is actually good.The side face things look weird. But i is okay. Nothing huge. A. The coloring was good too. I liked he tail, bu is someplaces you might have waned more spots. MORE SPOTS . I feel like I have been offering a lot of tests lately... Are you ready for one? If not we will do another assignment and hen you can tell me when you are ready. |
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DEWOTT'S TEST!
I am not gong to go easy, so take your time and make sure it is awesome! Fuse Mesprit, Gliscor, and Stoutland. Fuse any number of pokemon together to make a new sprite that looks completely new. (So like like a completely new pokemon). Fuse Ursaring, Maracus, and Gyrados. |
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Recolor Raikou with colors from Roserade Recolor Dialga with colors from Bouffalant and Ralts Recolor Klinklang with colors from Empoleon, Electrode, and Cacturne, but make every gear a different color. |
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So...Do I PM Syra? *is wandering around like a confused Zoroark* Last edited by SilverX; June 30, 2012 at 07:45:03 AM. |
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Please do these two assignments. I am not sure how good you are from what you gave me. So I will give you east ones Recolor Chansey as Trapinch, do not color the egg. Recolor Chansey as piplup, don't color the egg |
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Dark Sonic Okay, so I can see what you did wrong. And here is is.
Your grade is a D. Now don't feel down. because that just gives us more to work on. And you have more room to learn. So I am going to give you an easier one so this will be easier to assess. So Recolor Horsea with colors from Hypno |
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Dark Sonic
This is SO much better! A! There was only one flaw, and it would have been hard to fix. So you did really well compared to last time! Do you think you are getting the hang of it? Now I must remind you the EVERYTHING must be recolored, that is outlines, eye color, feet, whatever. Now lets see what happens when it is a little harder. Recolor Rhyhorn with colors from Beldom. |
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Dark Sonic. Wow, this is nice. There are 0 flaws! You did really well and I think I am getting acroos to you. A. So now I am not going to pull something hard on you yet. But I am going to assess you with this next assignment. Because I am still not sure if your problem is lack of improvement of you don't understand something, but then at times there seems not to have a problem at all. You are one confusing case! So do this for me. Recolor Delcatty with colors from Mawile |
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UPDATE:
Hello, as you all know because it is written right above this post, I am teamplasma. What you may not be familiar with is that I am the new Principal/Dean here. So that does me that (since it is me, and y'all should know me) there are going to be changes, and hopefully for the better. So check in often to be updated. Some of the things I will want to bring here is more power to the students, classes via VM PM and this thread. Another thing I would like to introduce is more classes, because there are many classes that are not here. So hopefully I will enrich you with even more choice. If you have any thought or suggestions I do ask you to send them to me through PM. But now I have to be gone for a few days (unless everyting goes right), so be expecting change. Thank you, Plaz.
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UPDATE:
Classes via PM and VM are now available. If you would like to convert, please say so. There is now a form on the front page, please use it for all class enrollment. We are now taking record if people who are taking classes. Next time you post here you will he registered. Last edited by teamplasma; July 5, 2012 at 06:10:19 PM. |
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Now I always assess the studeny before I do snythng so just do this (I dont care how derpy it is, just do your best. Recolor Pansear as Bayleaf |
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Well, here it is. I had to re-do it because the first time I had the colors swapped and it looked terrible. (The head was tan and the body was green.) Last edited by Cat333Pokémon; July 11, 2012 at 07:09:42 PM. |
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I'll be sure to have the Bagon colored Bayleef sooner than a month this time. XD By Friday, I swear. And for future reference, there is no space between the "Turtwig" and the "X" EDIT: I want to avoid double posting, so here's your Baygonleef. Last edited by TurtwigX; July 11, 2012 at 12:52:42 PM. |
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Blood Swampert
You did really well. I put it in paint to make sure that you didn't use any of the colors from the original pokemon and you didn't... But what you did do is make up 2 colors (unlease you are using an older version of the sprite...). But this makes me unsure of what you did. But all in all you followed all the rules and did mostly everything correctly. Very good. A This might be a little harder. Uxie colored with colors from Mime Jr. Aipom colored with colors from Monferno. If you do well I will add a new challenge. TurtwigX What you did wrong is fairly simple to fix. the two things wrong are the outlines; And on the top of the leaf you put a darker color than the rest of the leaf when it was supposed to be in between the two, like a transition color. C. So this is will help you... My advice to you is to be SURE thatnone of the colors from the original pokemon are not present. That none of the colors that you would normally see on it are there. that is really important in recolors. And will be even more crucial as the classes go on. What to do now? Please recolor Pupitar as Mew. This should help you deal with 4 colors and a simple. Now if you want to do your last assignment again and show me you can do it with an A, I would be happy, but it is optional. |
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Unless the original colors look absolutely ridiculous then it is nice is you wouldn't. If you do please say so, it helps me judge you. |
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Blood Swampert
These actually aren't bad. The only thing wrong with the first one is that a few pixels werent recolored. But there wasn't much you could do about it because there wasnt enough of the color. So that means that you get an A- The other one was just a little worse there was a few pixels you didn't recolor and thats it. So I suggest being more aware next time you do one. B When I grade everyone's stuff I feel like y'all dont know about this. VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV Next do this: Delibird colored as Pelipper. Next here is the new thing. In recoloring and up on you will have to recolor one pokemon with colors from multiple pokemon. It halps if there aren't enough colors. So that is what I am going to see if you can do with your new knowledge. NOw do this: Reuniclus with colors from Porygon and Registeel Last edited by Cat333Pokémon; July 11, 2012 at 07:05:28 PM. |
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It's just that I use a different program and recolor it pixel by pixel. My main problem with the eraser trick is Paint doesn't have transparency support, so I'd have to take it over to Paint.NET and make it transparent anyways.
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K', so I retried the Bayleef x Bagon thing. I didn't understand the leaf thing because it's darker in the sprite, but I tried to fix the outline. And the Pupitar x Mew I think came out well because it wasn't too much. I also changed Pupitar's eye color from Red to Mew's Blue (Please don't kill me)
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TurtwigX
You didn't do the leaf right once again. and I am not showing you this picture to make you feel bad or anything. But I am doing this to help you in your next ones. Do you see how the two pixels right............................................. .................................................. ........................^Here Well they should either not be there or be an in between color. So that is what I have to say about that.. And the outlines are now lighter then the colors it surrounds? That won't be good. But I think I am understanding you. B- You may not see it but you are improving. And I think I am about to get you to do a lot better soon. Okay On the second one, it was just like I wanted and you did great. A+ NOw practice on this. Dratini as Skitty Last edited by Cat333Pokémon; July 11, 2012 at 07:04:04 PM. |