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I like it, a bit short, really. I think an instrumental would be cool. I know you worked hard on this, but I have just one change.
You're 1000 miles away, and there's a million things to say That is me, because something you learn from pop culture is that people like association. Like in the song 1,2,3,4. Sometimes they use the word for and not four, because it is clever. Using a pattern of words appeals is what I am saying. |
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I'm gonna incorporate TeamPlasma's idea, but he gets the credit for that part.
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I'll also agree and say it's really short... And typically the basic format would be verse 1, verse 2, chorus, verse 1 (and if you want to make it really long, chorus, verse 2). But yeah, you'd typically have about 5-6 lines of lyrics per verse/chorus in a mostly standard format... Last edited by Luxray13579; June 10, 2012 at 09:00:57 AM. |
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